~A Random Poem~ ^-^

[LitTLAsIaNcHiCk]

How easy it will be,
When I have to leave,
Didn't know you long enough,
To even call you my brother

How simple life will be,
When you aren't there beside me,
No more worries, no more pain,
Just endless memories to cherish and gain

How easy was this poem to say ,
But speechless I am in every way,
A lie I told to stay above,
From telling you that I have fallen in love...

[Latowski]

Nice poem, although I seem to doubt you signed up just to do that. Oh, and you need to set a color or eliminate the end color tag.

EDIT: You might not want to set the color to black, since people like me have the style with the black background.

EDIT2: That's better. Thanks.

[CEG]

Cool, and you need to introduce yourself now. You know the standard stuff. How you found this place, who you are, etc.

[LitTLAsIaNcHiCk]

Nice poem, although I seem to doubt you signed up just to do that. Oh, and you need to set a color or eliminate the end color tag.

EDIT: You might not want to set the color to black, since people like me have the style with the black background.

EDIT2: That's better. Thanks.


LOL...still trying to figure this thing out! Thanks so much for the tip. Greatly appreciate it ^-^

[Alan]

i bet she's chris's girlfriend/sister/alter ego

[Latowski]

i bet she's chris's girlfriend/sister/alter ego


Not alter ego, since it's not the same IP. And I doubt it's his sister. As far as being his girlfriend, well....

[LitTLAsIaNcHiCk]

Cool, and you need to introduce yourself now. You know the standard stuff. How you found this place, who you are, etc.

i discovered this website through a friend...i am currently a freshman in college planning on majoring in elementary education...hmmm...oh ya, i love to write poems...the one i just posted was something i wrote this evening...spur of the moment type of deal i guess u could call it....i have better ones...this one was just embellishing on something i want to tell a friend of mine...but don't have the guts....silly eh?

[Latowski]

i discovered this website through a friend


Saying which friend would be good, so we can make assumptions about you. ;)

[LitTLAsIaNcHiCk]

Not alter ego, since it's not the same IP. And I doubt it's his sister. As far as being his girlfriend, well....

???? Now I'm confused...maybe cuz I should be in bed....but I don't know...

[Latowski]

???? Now I'm confused...maybe cuz I should be in bed....but I don't know...


We're talking about someone with an admitted obsession with asian women.

[LitTLAsIaNcHiCk]

Saying which friend would be good, so we can make assumptions about you. ;)

I don't know....think you might know him...ha ha ha :p

And may I inquire on what kind of assumptions you wish to make?

[Latowski]

I don't know....think you might know him...ha ha ha :p

And may I inquire on what kind of assumptions you wish to make?


Depends on who you know.

[Alan]

do you know a fat white guy that lives with his mom and gave up on his dream to be a japanese english teacher?

[LitTLAsIaNcHiCk]

We're talking about someone with an admitted obsession with asian women.

interesting...never heard that one before....

[LitTLAsIaNcHiCk]

do you know a fat white guy that lives with his mom and gave up on his dream to be a japanese english teacher?

i am sorry to say that i do not know of such a man...

[LitTLAsIaNcHiCk]

Depends on who you know.
hmm...i see

[Alan]

i am sorry to say that i do not know of such a man...

hes not a man at all

[marc]

hes not a man at all

He's a 2chinned man eating monster!

[Alan]

with large boobs!

[LitTLAsIaNcHiCk]

very descriptive...but perhaps more detail would be good...more realistic maybe?

[mepersoner]

Hi, welcome to spiralx.

Nice poem. One question though, why does the first stanza not rhyme and the following two stanzas do...

[LitTLAsIaNcHiCk]

Hi, welcome to spiralx.

Nice poem. One question though, why does the first stanza not rhyme and the following two stanzas do...

i noticed that too after i completed the poem...lol...i guess i couldn't think of any better phrases to use that would rhyme and still adhere to the context of the poem

[Cornelius]

Welcome to Sx, drop around to the other boards and holla :), so who is the mystery friend that invited u?


Now that politeness is out of the way, nude pics pls, unless by the little part of ure name u meant underage.

[mepersoner]

Now that politeness is out of the way, nude pics pls, unless by the little part of ure name u meant underage.

i am currently a freshman in college

She COULD be underage, but there's about a 75% chance she isn't.

[Cornelius]

Looks like someone expected me to pay more attention than is possible

[mepersoner]

How easy it will be,
When I go and am free,
Didn't know you the measure,
To even call you my brother

How simple life will be,
When you aren't there beside me,
No more worries, no more pain,
Just endless memories to cherish and gain

How easy was this poem to say ,
But speechless I am in every way,
A lie I told to stay above,
From telling you that I have fallen in love...


Hmmm, I think it could be fixed better still, or would like me to not dick around with your writing? ;)

[denkin]

poem good headache thread bad

[Alan]

personally i think the poem sucked

[LitTLAsIaNcHiCk]

okay...as i look back on the poem i wrote, i realize just how "bad" the first paragraph is...i tried to stick with an aabbcc rhyme scheme, but as you call all see...it didn't exactly work...didn't put too much thought into it as far as technicallity goes...as i mentioned b4...it was a spur of the moment type of deal...it could be better...

[LitTLAsIaNcHiCk]

Now that politeness is out of the way, nude pics pls, unless by the little part of ure name u meant underage.

I'm sorry, but I don't have any...I posted a graduation pic of myself that was taken shortly after my grad speech in June, but nothing topless. By the way, I am not a minor. I am 18 years of age (b-day in March^-^) Sorry to disappoint. I don't strip down for people so of course, you prolly won't see it posted on the net...

[proudfoot]

Don't listen to him. He's just messing around. ;)

Welcome to the forum, enjoy your stay. :)

[mepersoner]

I'm sorry, but I don't have any...I posted a graduation pic of myself that was taken shortly after my grad speech in June, but nothing topless. By the way, I am not a minor. I am 18 years of age (b-day in March^-^) Sorry to disappoint. I don't strip down for people so of course, you prolly won't see it posted on the net...

Rule #1 of SX (regardless of what the rules actually say), don't take 90% of the things anyone say seriously. They aren't seriously asking for nude pics, they don't seriously think your poem sucks (well Alam is an ass, so maybe). It's all just a joke. ;)

[LitTLAsIaNcHiCk]

Rule #1 of SX (regardless of what the rules actually say), don't take 90% of the things anyone say seriously. They aren't seriously asking for nude pics, they don't seriously think your poem sucks (well Alam is an ass, so maybe). It's all just a joke. ;)

ha ha...thanks for the tip

[Cornelius]

I actually wanted nude pics :(

[LitTLAsIaNcHiCk]

I actually wanted nude pics :(

lol... :rofl: