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stormcrowley
02-19-2005, 12:00 PM
For those of you who've read Twin Helix, I'm in the rough idea phase of a sequel right now. What characters would you like to see again, or futher developed?

NightHawk
02-19-2005, 12:24 PM
never read the first one.
can i? then ill tell you what you want to know.

stormcrowley
02-19-2005, 12:36 PM
It only seems long. The chapters are short.
http://www.livejournal.com/users/stormcrowley/403183.html

NightHawk
02-19-2005, 01:09 PM
pffft. its 5 in the morning, i havent gone to bed yet. i cant be bothered reading now.

stormcrowley
02-20-2005, 11:39 AM
...Then why'd you post?

proudfoot
02-21-2005, 02:19 AM
Fix up the first one until you're satisfied completely (especially with the grammar and structure of the early parts) and then worry about the next one.

stormcrowley
02-21-2005, 04:25 AM
Fix up the first one until you're satisfied completely

For me, there is no such thing with any creative project I do. There is always something more that can be done, and something to do better.

proudfoot
02-22-2005, 06:35 PM
Well... satisfactorily satisfied. There comes a time when you have to say "it's done," but with TH I don't think you can say that yet.

stormcrowley
02-27-2005, 04:36 AM
Actually, I can. I wrote it in chronological order - the story directly reflects how my writing ability has improved through the course of its creation. That's the main reason I'm loathe to do much with the opening chapters.

I mean, if there's a typo, or a better way to say something, sure, I'll edit. But as for a rewrite...nah. I like how it stands now. I'm not completely satisfied, but I'm pleased.

mepersoner
02-27-2005, 04:50 AM
Is his name Nero? Man, that one cool Abyssal who I wanted to see take on Aya and win.

stormcrowley
02-28-2005, 07:18 AM
Don't worry, I'm planning on him making an entrance.

Josh
03-01-2005, 05:59 PM
For me, there is no such thing with any creative project I do. There is always something more that can be done, and something to do better.
That's the biggest problem I have, when I write something, I am never happy with it, and always redo it, rewrite, or rephrase it...Gets to the point where it's hard to accept a chapter.

Cornelius
03-11-2005, 12:35 AM
The Blacksmith needs to kick some ass, Harmony with stones I'm mildly interested about.

I shall think more on this

mepersoner
03-11-2005, 03:19 AM
Cornelius, I think I'mk going to be ignoring your story when writing mine, hope you didn't plan on going anywhere with it.

Cornelius
03-13-2005, 07:46 AM
go right ahead, though next time where on aim, lemme know whats happening, cause im curious :P

stormcrowley
03-28-2005, 08:00 PM
I just posted chapter 1 & 2 of the sequel to Twin Helix.

Say you love it.